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What I see is what I give.
What I see is what I leave.
And no you won't see me thinking,
Because I only think shooting.
And you won't see my message,
Cause as a bird I have no cage.
What I see is all around,
Everywhere it can be found.
What I shoot is what I feel,
Always with a part of real.
And if I want share it with you,
It's just because I like that to.
What you see in what I give,
Makes me think of what you see.
I let you now this little breeze,
I let you with a "wait and see".
What I see is what I leave.
And no you won't see me thinking,
Because I only think shooting.
And you won't see my message,
Cause as a bird I have no cage.
What I see is all around,
Everywhere it can be found.
What I shoot is what I feel,
Always with a part of real.
And if I want share it with you,
It's just because I like that to.
What you see in what I give,
Makes me think of what you see.
I let you now this little breeze,
I let you with a "wait and see".
Written for ~Master-Tonio, following the idea of my last journal ([link]).
Anyway, just FYI it took me like 5 mins to write the whole stuff, as I write like I shoot, without thinking. Critics are appreciated ^^
PS: thanks again
, that's my first poem since like 15 years, and my first at all in english. Been a while 
Anyway, just FYI it took me like 5 mins to write the whole stuff, as I write like I shoot, without thinking. Critics are appreciated ^^
PS: thanks again
, that's my first poem since like 15 years, and my first at all in english. Been a while © 2008 - 2024 nyc0
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OMFG! I just can't see any better comment than this one : The word "Perfect" would be an insult for you poem if I'd say it.
It's really nice seriously... Why can't I manage to write poems like this one? T.T
It's really nice seriously... Why can't I manage to write poems like this one? T.T